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Dreams should be forever Poem
by ~freespaceFrom the emptiness of sleep I saw the profile of her nose,
Slightly up turned.
I saw her sleeping form In a white gown,
Innocent and delicate.
I saw brief moments Of a life with her.
Fragments of events,
Pieces of a jigsaw,
That I'll never see as whole.
I saw a walk in the park,
An adventure through a jungle,
I saw her parents,
Her house,
Her sisters and friends.
I saw myself in her bosom,
Laying in the silent comfort,
gentle understanding,
Of Love unspoken.
I saw us in a world
That exists only Within my dreams.
I saw myself living a life with her,
That has no beginning,
no end,
Only fragments:
Pieces of a shattered Stain Glass.
I saw the Dream That was ever with in me:
I wanted for the Dream To be for all eternity.
An alarum intruded.
My consciousness awoke.
Reluctant as I was,
It swam upwards:
From the warm,
Dark depths of sleep.
It shattered the surface Of my Dreamscape.
I awoke into reality,
Where my cat demands
To be fed,
Where the worries,
The expectations,
Come rushing into my mind.
Woe is awakening,
Dreams should be forever...
Its wonderfull - keep it up
In all seriousness, you have constructed a great poem, I particularly like the repetition as your vision/dream changes focus.
Great stuff... a definite fav
WHYWHY.
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Watch the man walk on over the hill ---->